یہ جام_ سرخ کسی شب اُچھلنے والا ہے


غزل

یہ جام_ سرخ کسی شب اُچھلنے والا ہے
مزاج_زیست یہیں سے بدلنے والا ہے

Ye jaam-e-surkh kisi shab uchalnay wala hay

Mizaj-e-zeest yaheeN say badalnay wala hay

سرک رہی ہیں درون_مکاں قبائیں پھر
مزاج_یار برہنہ نکلنے والا ہے

Sarak rahi hain daroon-e-makaaN qabayiN phir

Mizaj-e-yaar barehna nikalnay wala hay

ستم کیا کہ روایت نئ نئ ڈالی
یہ اژدہا تو مجھی کو نگلنے والا ہے

Sitam kia k riwayat nayi nayi daali

Ye ajdaha tu mujhii ko nigalnay wala hay

ترے دیار میں رقصاں رہا صدی بھر کو
خیال_یار ہے، پھر سے سنبھلنے والا ہے

Tiray dayar main raqsaaN raha sadi bhar ko

Khayal-e-yaar hay, phir say sanbhalnay wala hay

پھر اس کے بعد اُسے بھی قرار آئے گا
سمے کے طاق سے لمحہ پھسلنے والا ہے

Phir is k bad usay bhi qaraar aayega

Samay k taaq say lamha phisalnay wala hay

زوال پر ہیں ستارے مری امیدوں کے
تمھارے پیار کا سورج بھی ڈھلنے والا ہے

Zawaal par hain sitaray meri umeedoN k

Tumharay piyar ka sooraj bhi dhalnay wala hay

مرے نفس کی حرارت ہے حلقہء زنجیر
اب اس کے ضبط کا بندھن پگھلنے والا ہے

Miray nafas ki hararat hay halq-e-zanjeer

Ab us k zabt ka bandhan phigalnay wala hay

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About Rafiullah Mian

I am journalist by profession. Poet and a story writer.

Posted on March 16, 2012, in Ghazal and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 10 Comments.

  1. iqbal khursheed

    سمے کے طاق سے لمحہ پھسلنے والا ہے
    (چادوئی مصرع ہے)

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  2. زوال پر ہیں ستارے مری امیدوں کے
    تمھارے پیار کا سورج بھی ڈھلنے والا ہے

    that’s the best verse.

    but I’m not too sure what zawaal means 🙂

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  3. Blood-Ink-Diary

    Adaab Rafiullah, I borrow a line from Bahadur Shah Zafar’s poem: ‘Baat Karni kabhi mushkil ‘:

    “le gayaa chhiin ke kaun aaj teraa sabr-o-qarar
    beqaraarii tujhe ai dil kabhii aisii to na thii ”

    Your poem reminded me of this particular poem by ‘Zafar’. True, pain is inevitable — perhaps, even a charming extension of the humaness in a human. Sometimes the “chain” is a blessing.

    Keep penning, Mian. (thank you for your comment on my recent one, I have replied there!).
    Adaab, ssd

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    • Baat Karni Mujhe Mushkil Kabhi Aisii To Na Thii
      Jaisi Ab Hai, Teri Mehfil Kabhi Aisii To Na Thii
      Wah, aik khobsorat ghazal ki yad diladi hay ap nay.. Thanks

      You are right in your words 🙂
      Kabhi kabhi sabr-o-qaraar panchi ki tarah phur say uR jaatay hain…
      Ap ka reply read lia hay, with a thanks note!

      Keep visiting. keep reading. It is honour for me.
      shukria k sath,
      Adaab

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  4. سرک رہی ہیں درون_مکاں قبائیں پھر
    مزاج_یار برہنہ نکلنے والا ہے

    سرک رہی ہیں قباؤں کی آندھیاں مجھ میں
    YEH KAON HAI JO BRAHNA NIKALNE WALA HAI

    nOW THAT YOU HAVE CHOSEN TO ALTER YOUR OWN SHER, i AM TORN BETWEEN THE TWO AS TO WHICH ONE IS BETTE. LIKE THE FIRST LOVE, I TEND TO VOTE FOR THE EARLIER ONE “Sarak rahi hain qabaaon ki aandhiyan” both are equally expressive though. I said I rmembered a painting before, today I remember Ghalib’s sher ,”Ibne Mariyam hua kare koi, Mere dukh ki dawa kare koi.
    The whole ghazal is a beauty. hanks again.

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    • I was worrying that the earlier one expresses straightly without some poetic veil, and I had gotten excitement since it has happened with its original shape. Now, as some of my poet friends indicated, I putted some changes in thought. Behrhaal, it was very difficult for me.
      Ap k jazbat, ap k taasuraat, ap k haafzay main araam-farma Ghalib sahib k ahsar k sath sar’at say aamaiz hojaatay hain… aor dilchisp aamaiza hota hay ye..
      Ghazal ko sarahnay k liye nihayat mamnoon hoN…

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  5. Blood-Ink-Diary

    Aadaab Rafi Mian,

    “Zawaal par hain sitaray meri umeedoN k
    Tumharay piyar ka sooraj bhi dhalnay wala hay”

    Piercing…the poem feels like the smoothness of ‘shabnam’, and at the same time a piercing needle injecting the heart. Wah ! Buhut khuub. “halq-e-zanjeer’ speaks fot itself…Khuub.
    Mian, lovely lovely shairi. Likhthey raho…

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    • Adaab Shaheen,

      I am grateful to you. For reading and understanding my poetry. And obviously for nice comments. I think the pain is something which comes with the life inevitably. And we always strive for the smoothness of our lives. Always try to chain all the smoothness of life. Thanks thanks for compliment…

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