اپنے خوابوں کو بیچتی ہے وہ


غزل

درد سے درد کھینچتی ہے وہ

اک بری لت ہے، سوچتی ہے وہ

Dard say dard khenchti hay wo

Ik buri lat hay, sochti hay wo

میرے آنسو میں کون روتا ہے

میری آنکھوں سے پوچھتی ہے وہ

Meray aansu man kon rota hay

Meri ankhoN say poochti hay wo

سرد پہروں میں اوڑھنی لے کر

دیر تک مجھ کو سوچتی ہے وہ

Sard pehroN main oRhni lekar

Dair tak mujh ko sochti hay wo

گرد میرے اجاڑ راتوں میں

کس اداسی سے ناچتی ہے وہ

Gird meray ujaaR ratoN main

Kis udasi say nachti hay wo

نیند اس کو یونہی نہیں آتی

اپنے خوابوں کو بیچتی ہے وہ

Neend usko yunhi nahi aati

Apnay khwaboN ko baichti hay wo

اپنی آشُفْتَگی کو وہ جانے

گھاؤ اپنا جو نوچتی ہے وہ

Apni aashuftagi ko wo janay

Ghaao apna jo nochti hay wo

دفن کرتی ہے کوکھ میں جب ایک

اک گماں اور سینچتی ہے وہ

Dafn karti hay kokh main jab aik

Ik gumaN aor sainchti hay wo

کیا پتا، لوٹ کر نہ آئے پھر

سایہ ڈر کر دبوچتی ہے وہ

Kia pata, loat kar na aaye phir

Saya dar kar dabochti hay wo

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About Rafiullah Mian

I am journalist by profession. Poet and a story writer.

Posted on March 21, 2012, in Ghazal and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 14 Comments.

  1. iqbal khursheed

    Good job, keep walking

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  2. It is really nice… I loved it…

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  3. “Gird meray ujaaR ratoN main
    Kis udasi say nachti hay who”

    These two lines felt on the heart like a “nashtar”. Rafiullah Mian, I, in my humble mind am only trying to fathom the depth of your beautiful words. As somebody who loves Urdu shayari; being here and reading your work is giving me great pleasure. Bless your pen and the ink that flows from it.

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    • Yes, SF, this whole Ghazal portrays a state of mind which is look like transfixion, yet, with simple thoughts.
      Really it gives me immense pleasure when someone, who is not so use to with Urdu in her/his routine life, makes a visit and leave comments.. Thanks for dua, may Almighty Allah bless upon your whole life…

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  4. گرد میرے اجاڑ راتوں میں
    کس اداسی سے ناچتی ہے وہ

    نیند اس کو یونہی نہیں آتی
    اپنے خوابوں کو بیچتی ہے وہ

    aapney yey bohuth achee tharaa likaahey
    “Kis udasi say nachti hay wo”
    the agony of someone without peace of mind
    when one becomes insomniac, no dreams come to closed eyes 🙂

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  5. Blood-Ink-Diary

    Adaab Rafiullah,

    Wah, Mian.

    “Kia pata, loat kar na aaye phir
    Saya dar kar dabochti hay wo”

    saaye se bhi shikwa na karenge. You have composed this very beautifully. It’s like the breeze of cholistan in the winter – soft, pungent, piercing. I totally relish your work Rafiullah. You must pen a book — I shall be most fortunate to purchase your fine collection!

    Jeete raho, Rafiullah Mian. SSD

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    • Adaab Shaheen Dhanji,

      Cholistan desert…. a disastrous metaphor to this ghazal…
      It’s true that the Ghalib lovers must have very good understanding of verses. It’s my great privilege that I have 2 great Ghalib lovers on my blog.
      Many Thanks for complement. But a book.. it is Ghorak-Dhanda in Pakistan 🙂 However, when my collection will publish, it will be in your hands, directly.. aap ko khareedni nahi paregii, I am sure!

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  6. سرد پہروں میں اوڑھنی لے کر
    دیر تک مجھ کو سوچتی ہے وہ

    I could have chosen any other sher as easily since all of them are equally beautiful. I liked this more perhaps it rings a bell somewhere. You so acutely manage to depict the true feelings of us humans (men actually) I am amazed.
    Keep writing please.and many thanks.
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    • Shakil Akhtar sahib,
      Aap bohot easily asha’ar k sath deeply connection joR laitay hain, ye mujhe har baar heran hi karta hay.
      Aor ap jesay poetry lover ka tu shukria bhi asani say ada nahi kia jasakta, behrhal, thanks allot for honouring my blog..

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      • khuda taala jab kisi se khush hota hai to us ko mohobbat ataa karta hai. ham ko bhi yeh gumaan sa hai. mohobbat ke beghair aap ke, ya koi bhi ashaar samajhna mumkin nahin hoga, yeh lagta hai.
        Aap likhte rahen kyoon ki aap se bhi Allah khush lagta hai.

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        • These words are a great honour for me…
          Meri dua hi yahi hoti hay k Allah mujh say khush ho, beside my weak acts, aor mujhe muhabbat ka har rang ata karay..
          Allah ap say hamesha khuhs rahay..

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