Afsana

افسانہ کھیل

Afsana Khail

Published In quarterly Ijra Karachi (Edition 9 / January-March 2012)

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افسانہ Afsana

مرد نہیں روتے Mard Nahi Rote

Afsana: Mard Nahi Rote

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 Afsana افسانہ

Shaheed شہید

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افسانہ  Afsana

تحفہ  Tuhfa

نوٹ: یہ افسانہ او ہنری کی مشہور کہانی اے گفٹ آف دی میگی سے ماخوذ ہے۔

Afsana: TUHFA

Afsana: TUHFA

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  1. I have bookmarked this page, shall read it soon Insha Allah. 🙂

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  2. “mard nahin rote” parh kar rona aya. In the early days of IInd WW, Hitler and Churchill agreed NOT to attack each others Universities. They bombed each others countries but kept their promise about the universities. Here we are desroying our own institutions. Very sad and worrysome. You have, Sir, touched a very sensitive and important chord in our national life and also did it very beautifully… Like his shaving with mirror etc kept in a tin box etc…
    (2) I had to read “Shaheed” umpteen times still I am not sure I understand what you are trying to say. I think she “lost” him when she “Found” herself? Any way nice try.
    (3) Tohfa I read long ago in this blog but today I found it very interesting. Especially the end is very touching “…sofe ki pusht se tek laga kar chupke chuple rone laga.” Thanks for writing these afsanas Rafi Sahab.

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    • Is kahani ka idea jab meray dimagh main aya, tu agarche aik point par mabni idea tha, lekin is nay aatay hi mujhay baqaeda ruladia tha. is k bad jitna is par sochta gaya, meri jazbati kefiat barhti gayi.
      Ap nay bilkul theek nishandahi ki. Jin logoN ko talemi idaroN ki salamti ka ehsas hay, wo is par jazbati hoe baghair nahi reh paatay. Hamain baqayida sazish k tehet taleemi idaroN say marhoom kia jaraha hay. tu kaheein par taleem hi say mehroom kia jaraha hay. hamari azadi k 66/67 sal isi dukh say ibarat hain. hum bahaisiat-e-qoam educate nahi hopaaye, nateeja ye hay k aaj bh slum area minds hum par hukoomat kar rahay hain.

      Shaheed… hahaha… this is the story of a looser girl. who looses her lover because of her “Taghaaful” …. you know like Urdu ghazal’s Mehbooba… wo apnay mehboob par apnay taghaaful aor berukhi k zarye zulm karti hay… yahaN tak k wo feed-up hojata hay… wo giRgiRata hay lekin wo kisi aor khayaloN main hoti hay… Aik din os ka lover muhabbat ka bhoot apnay sar say utaar kar phaink deta hay.. aor mehbooba jo zehni complexity ka shikaar hay…. mehsoos karti hay k os nay apnay mehboob ko maar dia hay… is liye jab wo lover say milnay jaati hay tu lover osay reject kardeta hay. aor kehta hay k wo os k liye mar gaya hay… mehbooba samajhti hay k lover mar nahi sakta, wo tu os k andar shaheed ki tarah hamesha zinda rahega… 🙂

      I am pleased to know that you read my stories and like…. I am thankful to you janab… bohot shukria 🙂

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