تیرے ماتھے کا شمس ہے درکار
قطعہ
سایہ بن کر دعا نہ دے مجھ کو
سبز ہاتھوں کا لمس ہے درکار
میرے من کے اندھیرے گہرے ہیں
تیرے ماتھے کا شمس ہے درکار
Saya ban-kar dua na day mujh ko
Sabz haathoN ka lams hay darkaar
Meray man k andheray gehray hain
Teray maathay ka shams hay darkaar
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Posted on April 2, 2012, in Asha'ar and tagged darkaar, lams, poetry, qita, rafiullah, rafiullahmian, rahi, rrahi, sabz hath, shams, urdu shayiri. Bookmark the permalink. 15 Comments.
میرے من کے اندھیرے گہرے ہیں
تیرے ماتھے کا شمس ہے درکار
شان دار!
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شکریہ جناب
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bohat aala !
thanks for visiting my humble blog 🙂
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Welcome Ali Adnan,
And thank you for your visit.
Allah ap ko khush rakhay.
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urdu is just so beautiful. it plays with my mind in beautiful ways …
and yet, I do not understand the full meaning of the words 🙂
don’t pray for me by being my shadow
…..
the darkness in my mind is just too deep
………
😆
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Aha, Thank you Amira.
obviously, for the last two lines. 🙂
but actually the first one is: Don’t pray for me as shadow (coz shadow say mera koi wasta nahi, it is the other one’s)
Is This translation has a logic? (Do not ask me as Shadow) If the word ‘Ask’ can be used for ‘Dua’?
Thanks again.
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Any book you ave published yet ?
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Syed Owais,
I haven’t any yet.
I am thankful for your visit.
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Ghazal to the aforementioned comment I sent prior to this one…..
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Aadaab Rafi Mian,
Kya khud se baatein karte hai, jahaan tanhaa_iion ka mela hota hai. Rafi Mian, you have written poignant thoughts. Shayad, buhut zakhm bhar gayaa, Mian ji.
Reminds me of a ghazal by Talat Aziz and penned by Saeed Rahi: (one of my fav ones!)
“Chahenge tujhe par kabhi rusva na karenge
Saaye se bhi apane tera shikva na karenge
Poochenge havaao se ghataao se tera haal
milne ko tere vaste aaya na karenge
Tu mil bhi gaya raah me bhule se jo mujko
milne ka dubara kabhi vada na karenge
Jis naam ki taazeem kiya karte hai parade
us naam ko divaar pe likha na karenge”
Adaab Mian. Likthey raho.
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Adaab Shaheen,
Meray dukh aor meri khushyaN.. ash’aar main apna izhar paatay hain.
Ap theatre say wabista hain, behtar tor par janti hain k, dunya aik aesa stage hay jis par aik dukh-bhari kahani musalsal chal rahi hay.. parda girta hay, parda uthta hay.. lekin dard wahen rehta hay, jam kar!
Ap nay achi ghazal share ki hay. bohot shukria is k liye.
shukria
khush rahain sada.
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Bilkul sahi likha, Rafi ji. I am also into theatre and in the midst of a theatrical project.
“Parda girta hai, parda uthta hai”, hum sab kirdaar hai apne yatra ki. Did you think of Face Off? Kya decide kiya?
Sada khush rahein, Rafiullah.
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Alas, Face Off!
You know, I have sent an email (on 30th march) to Mr. Jamal Shah on Hunerkadah email address…….. but no reply.
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لوگوں کو ہے خورشید جہاں تاب کا دھوکا
ہر روز دکھاتا ہوں میں اک داغ نہاں اور
Aap ke ashaar aur deegar nigarishaat se yeh lagta hai ke: har roz dikhata hoon ek …..
bahot khoob. likhte rhiye.
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Behad mamnoon hoN ap ka..
ap tabsira karay hain tu mujhay andaza hota hay k main apni takhleeq k sath darhaqeeqat kahaN khaRa hoN…
shukria
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